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Unrefined Edges: Thoughtful Poems About the Complexity of Someone Rough

A varied collection of poems gathered around this subject, with space for different voices, images, and moods.

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01

About Someone

Rough Heart

Your roughness, a shadow on your face,
A secret held, in every place.
In your harshness, I see the truth,
A heart that's lost, a wasted youth.

02

About Someone

Harsh

Your roughness, a burden you bear,
A shadow that follows, everywhere.
In your eyes, I see the pain,
A heart that's lost, in the rain.

03

About Someone

Abrasive

Your roughness, a constant plight,
A shadow that haunts, day and night.
In your harshness, I see the cost,
A heart that's lost, forever lost.

04

About Someone

Rough Ways

Your roughness, a hardened light,
In your touch, no delight.
Every act, a harsh stream,
In your presence, no peaceful dream.
Your rough ways, a guiding star,
In your touch, we wander far.
Thank you for the lessons taught,
In your roughness, understanding's sought.
With your harshness, I see the truth,
In your rough ways, proof.

05

About Someone

Harsh Heart

Your roughness, a shadowed path,
In your touch, a hidden wrath.
Every act, a harsh beam,
In your presence, no peaceful dream.
Hoping you find calm one day,
And let your harshness sway.
Thank you for the clarity found,
In your roughness, my truth is bound.

06

About Someone

Rough Edges

In the harshness of your ways,
Lies a world of rugged days.
Each word you speak, each thought you hold,
Reflects a heart, bold.
Your roughness, a shadowed light,
Turns brightness into night.
With every move, every cheer,
You show a heart, sincere.
In your ruggedness, life does sing,
A melody of everything.
Forever rough, forever true,
In your spirit, life renews.

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